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The Shining: Assessing Strengths And Weaknesses


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The novel The Shining was written by a young writer.  Doctor Sleep was written by a much more mature  author.  About six months ago I went back and read a bit of The Shining.  I was not  surprised to find that there were points that I found dry.  The novel itself is strong, but there are these patches of  difficulty for the reader.

Sean Chumley does a nice job identifying both the strengths and weaknesses of the novel in his short review at examiner.com.

I'll break this down into a simple list form.  These are quotes from Chumley's article.

What king nails:

  • The horror is often very effective
  • the characters are very well defined.
  • They're realistic people with believable problems.

Where King Wanders

  • Sometimes King gets a little too detailed with the hotel's upkeep when all we really want is ghosts. (YES!)
  • Everything has a purpose in the novel, but sometimes the payoff is delayed a bit too long to really excite.


This reminds me the Van  Hise review of THE SHINING in the Star Trek fanzine, Enterprise Incidents.  This was a special issue dedicated to Stephen King.  The effort expended for this project seems tremendous.  There is special artwork, reviews and articles.  The artwork is exceptional!

This is one of the earliest tributes to King I can think of.  Here’s what’s funny. . . reviewer James Van Hise doesn’t give positive reviews to a lot of King’s work (like The  Shining)– yet he seems to love Stephen King books.  Here’s what’s really fun –Van Hise isn’t afraid to have an opinion!  Oh, he has LOTS and LOTS!  But he shares them without apology.  He doesn’t spend a lot of time working around what he thinks, or building up to it – he just says it. That’s really refreshing!

VAN HISE REVIEW OF: THE SHINING



Mr. Van Hise likes The Shining, but complains that it has "too much characterization." While Salem’s Lot was a big novel with lots of characters, The Shining is a big novel with just a few characters.

In van Hise’s words:
"The complaint I’m making is that when writer has a finely conceived story, there is no reason to detour from it into subplots and extraneous discourses which have nothing to do with that plot. Characterization is fine, but let’s not overdo it, and this book certainly does overdo it, mostly with Jack Torrance. The book is about the Overlook Hotel and what it does to these people one winter. When the story stays here it’s great. What happened to Jack Torrance when he lsot his job is just a big rap which he wasn’t able to roll with. Drumming that fact into our heads time after time isn’t necessary. Certainly it was important to describe Jack Torrance ine nough back ground detail so that we can understand why his mental collapse is believable, but too much of this reached the point hwere it came across to me as just padding. I’m well aware that this is a terrible thing to say about a writer, and I’m not saying that this is what King did, but rather that this is the effect it achieved. Fortunately, the book’s strong points far overshadow its weak ones."
The reason Jack’s firing was so important to the book is that it was one of the catalyst for his drinking. Or return to drinking. I find all the background information does slow the story – but I can press on because I actually enjoy all these asides. If this was my first time reading The Shining, I think I too would be annoyed! "Where’s this going?" I would ask. But I already know where this is going, so I can take time to enjoy the greater depth King gives these characters.

Now, for an early commentary on the Kubrick film! Remember, please, Van Hise hasn’t had years of King and others griping about the film. It was met with generally good reviews, so it takes some perception. 
"The film is also an abortion from the standpoint of the fact that the movie ends before it even reaches the point in the book where the climax really gets rolling. Yes, the movie cuts out the climax of the book, which is the very facet of the story which insured its popularity, because unlike the film, the book is not anti-climactic. The book builds to such a wild, ever pritch that it remains a classic of the genre no matter how many other horror stories you’ve ever rad. Whereas Salem’s Lot is a better book on the whole, The Shining contains his finest climax from every standpoint, and especially for sheer power and imagination.   
Whatever else may be disappointing in the book, the climax is not! It delivers a one-two punch which carries the reader straight through to the conclusion with pile-driver intensity and in an extremely satisfying manner. This book cried out fo a powerful screen translation, rather than the commonplace treatment it received at the hands of Stanley Kubrick. Because of this, there are a lot of people out there who don’t understand why The Shining was a bestseller, or why it was even made into a film at all, and that’s criminal. Kubric has made King seem like an ordinary writer, and all because Kubric took excellent material and made an ordinary film. If there is anything The Shining is not, it’s ordinary."
I can hear the "experts" on Room 237 shouting, screaming, crying at this! "The Shining" a "ordinary" film? I love the way van Hise gives such credit to the book.

ENTERPRISE INCIDENTS: THE STAND

The introduction to this set of reviews is at talkstephenking.blogspot.com




Van Hise Review Of: THE STAND
From ENTERPRISE INCIDENTS

The article on The Stand takes time to focus on a character that might be dumbed down: Harold.  Van Hise writes, “Harold is one of the most interesting characters in the book.”  I totally agree!  I find myself amazed at the depth of insight King brings to Harold. He also credits Nick Andros and Tom Cullen with stealing the show, saying, “and they’re what makes reading the book a truly memorable experience because they have all of the best scenes.”

About Flagg, Van Hise suggests that for all the build up, he’s not really that scary.
“When he does emerge as a full time character near the end of the book, his awesomeness is greatly diminished and he seems no more dangerous than your average, run-of-the-mill gangster.  Although genuinely portrayed as being an agent of Satan, his strength seems to fade under close scrutiny and his characterization becomes superficial and mild and not at all as frightening as we had been led to expect from earlier appearances in the book, and this is really disappointing.”
I don’t know about that.  I remember reading The Stand for the first time, and finding Flagg very frightening.  I didn’t know what he might do. Only after reading the book do I look back and go, “humm, he was kind of a flunkie!”

OKAY VAN HISE. . . WHAT COULD BE WRONG WITH THE STAND?  HUH?  Oh, he has a few things to note. . . I cut them down to neat bullet points:

  • Too long.  (He was reading the abridged version!)
  • End of the world saga’s are “trite.”
  • King's work in The Stand does not "equal himself."  ie, it's not as good as The Shining.

I do agree with this; Van Hise writes,
“The concept of a battle fo good versus evil (with all the good people in Boulder and all the bad people in Vegas) is an interesting new wrinkle, but it is never brought off.  We are constantly led to expect the penultimate conflict, and instead it’s all terribly low key, and on a subdued personal level, and with a little irony thrown in.  We are expecting a climax at least as powerful as what King served up in The Shining, and instead we get one which is as weak and diluted as the movie version of The Shining, which ended before the the climax could ever begin.”
The ending is unexpected!  King defiantly seems to be moving the story toward a war of some kind, and instead simply lets evil self destruct.  I’ve often wondered why Larry and the others needed to go take their “Stand” and be sacrificed, if evil was just going to collapse on itself.  I guess to prove God’s righteousness in destroying them.  There is actually a whole theology behind that thought!  Anyway, I too would have liked to have seen a war between Boulder and Vegas.

This is funny: Van Hise writes,
“In an interview a while back, King mentioned that before The Stand was published, his editor at Doubleday made him take out 300 pages from the story.  If the book is unwieldy at 800 pages, I can’t even imagine what it would have been like had it hit a thousand pages. As it is, when  I finished it, I felt that I had completed an ordeal, lie running an obstacle course which had occasional pleasant diversions.  This is not to say that I'm sorry that I read it, because there are some extremely memorable scenes in this book, it's just that I wish there had been more, and that one of them had been the ending."

ENTERPRISE INCIDENTS: THE SHINING

VAN HISE REVIEW OF: THE SHINING

(The Shining Journal, #3)



Mr. Van Hise likes The Shining, but complains that it has "too much characterization." While Salem’s Lot was a big novel with lots of characters, The Shining is a big novel with just a few characters.

In van Hise’s words:
"The complaint I’m making is that when writer has a finely conceived story, there is no reason to detour from it into subplots and extraneous discourses which have nothing to do with that plot. Characterization is fine, but let’s not overdo it, and this book certainly does overdo it, mostly with Jack Torrance. The book is about the Overlook Hotel and what it does to these people one winter. When the story stays here it’s great. What happened to Jack Torrance when he lsot his job is just a big rap which he wasn’t able to roll with. Drumming that fact into our heads time after time isn’t necessary. Certainly it was important to describe Jack Torrance ine nough back ground detail so that we can understand why his mental collapse is believable, but too much of this reached the point hwere it came across to me as just padding. I’m well aware that this is a terrible thing to say about a writer, and I’m not saying that this is what King did, but rather that this is the effect it achieved. Fortunately, the book’s strong points far overshadow its weak ones."
The reason Jack’s firing was so important to the book is that it was one of the catalyst for his drinking. Or return to drinking. I find all the background information does slow the story – but I can press on because I actually enjoy all these asides. If this was my first time reading The Shining, I think I too would be annoyed! "Where’s this going?" I would ask. But I already know where this is going, so I can take time to enjoy the greater depth King gives these characters.

Now, for an early commentary on the Kubrick film! Remember, please, Van Hise hasn’t had years of King and others griping about the film. It was met with generally good reviews, so it takes some perception. 
"The film is also an abortion from the standpoint of the fact that the movie ends before it even reaches the point in the book where the climax really gets rolling. Yes, the movie cuts out the climax of the book, which is the very facet of the story which insured its popularity, because unlike the film, the book is not anti-climactic. The book builds to such a wild, ever pritch that it remains a classic of the genre no matter how many other horror stories you’ve ever rad. Whereas Salem’s Lot is a better book on the whole, The Shining contains his finest climax from every standpoint, and especially for sheer power and imagination.   
Whatever else may be disappointing in the book, the climax is not! It delivers a one-two punch which carries the reader straight through to the conclusion with pile-driver intensity and in an extremely satisfying manner. This book cried out fo a powerful screen translation, rather than the commonplace treatment it received at the hands of Stanley Kubrick. Because of this, there are a lot of people out there who don’t understand why The Shining was a bestseller, or why it was even made into a film at all, and that’s criminal. Kubric has made King seem like an ordinary writer, and all because Kubric took excellent material and made an ordinary film. If there is anything The Shining is not, it’s ordinary."
I can hear the "experts" on Room 237 shouting, screaming, crying at this! "The Shining" a "ordinary" film? I love the way van Hise gives such credit to the book.

The introduction to this set of reviews is at talkstephenking.blogspot.com

ENTERPRISE INCIDENTS: CARRIE and SALEMS' LOT





CARRIE:

What Van Hise does like is Carrie.  “Carrie seems like it has been part of the literature of terror forever,” he writes.  “And yet it is barely half a decade old.” Now, with two musicals, plays, three  movies and multiple reissues of the book, it seems more than ever that Carrie has always been with us!

Van Hise also notes,
“The texture of this novel is quite unique int hat even when it was first published, before any film was made, the reader knew that something monstrous was going to happen because the text is sprinkled with asides which were ostensibly excerpts from artilces and papers written on the tragedy of Carrie White and the horrors she wrought. Thus while we are meeting the characters and encountering their backgrounds, we also experience tension and suspense wondering what it’s all leading up to.”
He also gives high marks to the movie Carrie. “Carrie remains the best cinematic adaptation of King which has been made thus far, Salem’s Lot and The Shining both having some nic scenes but mortal flaws at their core.”

SALEMS' LOT




Van Hise declares Salem’s Lot his favorite novel – as well as King’s.  Of course, King seems to love most whatever he’s working on at the time.  “The book is a totally satisfying reading experience which will bear rereading with just as much pleasure as the first time through.”

He spends a lot of time complaining about the movie.  Several paragraphs, reminding readers that what they saw on TV does not really represent the book. Of course, I liked the movie a lot – but I’ve had many more years to be disappointed by Stephen King movies, so I’m a little numb and my standards are low!

The introduction to this set of reviews is at talkstephenking.blogspot.com

ENTERPRISE INCIDENTS PRESENTS STEPHEN KING




10,000 Magazines, #9995
Enterprise Incidents Presents Stephen King, 1984

With a new Star Trek movie out, it seems fitting to look back at Star Trek and Stephen King.  Well, there isn’t much to go on there!  King makes the occasional Star Trek reference, but it’s not like his love for Batman.  Years ago I did come upon a small treasure called Enterprise Incidents.

Enterprise Incidents was a Star Trek fanzine.  This was a special issue dedicated to Stephen King.  The effort expended for this project seems tremendous.  There is special artwork, reviews and articles.  The artwork is exceptional!


This is one of the earliest tributes to King I can think of.  Here’s what’s funny. . . reviewer James Van Hise doesn’t give positive reviews to a lot of King’s work – yet he seems to love Stephen King books.  Here’s what’s really fun –Van Hise isn’t afraid to have an opinion!  Oh, he has LOTS and LOTS!  But he shares them without apology.  He doesn’t spend a lot of time working around what he thinks, or building up to it – he just says it. That’s really refreshing!

Because this magazine is totally dedicated to Stephen King, not just one article – I’m going to give it some space.  I think the project was big enough, it deserves a little room on this blog.  So, in the days to come I’m going to post my reviews of Van Hise’s reviews.  Sound a little confusing?  Like having a commentary track over the commentary track!

I highly recommend the magazine!  You can buy it at www.amazon.com