Narrative Project: Finalising Audio (Feedback Appreciated)

We have produced 3 different versions for the final audio for our animation. The audio gets shorter each time as we took out parts each time. The first one is shorter than our rough animatic. Second we decided to take out a bit that we felt wasn't very important and the third one, we cut of a chunk at the end to shorten it.
We are struggling to decide on which one to use so any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

Narrative Project: Sound Process

When we had done our rough script we was advised to cut up the sound from the interview of our chosen grandparent and put it together and edit it to improve the sound as well as seeing if what was said made sense and went together well. 

I was given this task of editing the sound. This process took 4 stages.

Stage 1: The original interview

Stage 2: Cutting the questions out
Stage 3: Cutting any pauses and "umms"

Stage 4: The person talks slowly as she is quite elderly so we needed to speed the sound up a bit so it didn't sort of drag on at points but hopefully the sound still sounds natural.