Elise is the first
vampire born, the first vampire who has never been a human - and the first
vampire with a dark secret presence in her mind
She has left home to
live in Paris for several years to try and get some space to find herself. But
with the talks to try and establish a lasting peace in Europe, she finds
herself back in Chicago
And facing the beast inside her - and a plot to end the peace talks and put the whole city at risk
I… can’t say I’m a
huge fan of Elisa? I mean I don’t feel any especially personality with her. And
I’m trying hard not to compare her to Merit - but it’s inevitable that since
this series is literally the heir to the previous Chicagoland series; the
protagonists are going to be compared. And Merit with her love of books and
junk food and baseball, her snark and close relationships, her determination to
face down Ethan and her father - Merit had personality, Merit was a character
and she was surrounded by other characters.
Elise… isn’t? I mean
she likes coffee… that’s kind of like the only thing I know about her. Her
personality,wishes, desires, hopes, everything is subsumed into both her
struggle with the Beast and her
I-hate-him-but-we’re-definite-love-interests-Connor.
What’s most
frustrating is how much meat there’s there! She’s the first born vampire. She
grew up never seeing the sun and literally not knowing what she was and
surrounded by supernaturals. She moved away to France and spent years there
trying to find herself. How can this not inform her character? How can someone
so unique with such different life experiences BE SO BLAND?! Why doesn’t her
years in France inform any of her character except her hanging around with
French vampires who are shuffled out of the way before we have to focus on them
too much. Why isn’t her being the
And there’s the
“beast” which is again, blandified. If your character is literally hosting a
powerful magical entity that feasts on rage and turns her eyes red I expect it
to be… more? I mean now and then she struggles to control it - as in we have a
paragraph of her saying no to the Beast, and we move on. And when she loses
control? She beats up someone who kind of deserves it? She fights hard in a
situation where she’s already fighting? The unwillingness to make Elise do
anything truly bad or awful with the Beast (she beat up a man who stole from
and was going to sexually assault her best friend? Merit would do that twice,
no need for the Beast) makes it all feel limp and, yes, bland
To add to the
blandness we have the characters around her. Merit worked because she was
surrounded by fun an awesome characters as well -he conflicts and romance with
Ethan was interesting. She had Mallory her best friend which waxed and waned,
there was Catcher and Jeff and her grandfather and the fraught relationship
with her parents and even her frustrating relationship with Morgan. There were
PEOPLE in her life and they were all informed enough and interesting enough to
add to the story, to her story.