Showing posts with label Real Toads renga. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Real Toads renga. Show all posts

Wednesday, May 9, 2012

Journey's End

Greetings, all! Grace here. You may have noticed the "format challenge" tag moving around a bit--I'm sorry to say this is my last format challenge article for now. I'm looking forward to having time to write and share poems and experiences with you more often, though!

I had planned to write you a very scholarly article on any number of things, but I thought, we so rarely go back and practice things that were novel once. So let us go back and try, try again. If you don't like that idea, feel free to Google "villanelle" and meet my nemesis.

You may choose any of the following, listed from most recent to least: renga (I suggest forming a group of at least three for easiest organization), tanka, fixed-form haiku, tanaga, aubade, a traditional Welsh combination, toddaid, cywydd llosgyrnog, awdl gywydd, triolet, rondeau or rondeau redoublé , rondelet, or roundel.

I'm grateful for the opportunity to have shared all of these forms with you, and now I'm looking forward to being a participant rather than a commenter!

Aside from that, I wanted to leave you with the beautiful renga that we have all created together. I've added the ageku and given it a title. I hope you all enjoyed writing it as much as I enjoyed watching it come together.

Had I the Words: a Real Toads renga.

Some claim April rain
brings the blossoms of May, but
trees here are hasty

like youth, ardor unrestrained,
eager for Spring's first sweet kiss.

Sakura blossoms
in the arms of Old Man Tree--
drops of moonlit milk.

Showgirls performing a dance
inspir'd by Moonlight's embrace,

their graceful waves in
a risqué spring ballet, legs
kick the silver sky,

stars wink at rainbow feathers
that tease with each fluttering.

My full heart flutters,
I become dancer and dance
under April's moon,

and a blossoming cherry
in the sweet, full warmth of May.

Still, you, resting far
north where snow still flies and melts,
await midnight summer.

Polar day does not circle
on cosmic calliope--

Pegasus gallops
to the music of the spheres
while star clusters spin,

the earth spins on its axis,
hums its music in B flat,

Spring pirouettes ice,
spun sugar and crystal shards,
across the cosmos.

Bright silver vessel, half moon
empties dawn into morning,

the night bids farewell.
Leaving a trail of stardust,
it flies on its way.

Restored to herself, the earth
resumes her orderly spin.

At a loss for words--
coherence has taken flight
on the wings of nerves--

I pluck the blossoming twig,
write the character for "love."

Verses contributed by Art Happens 365, Skylover, Ella, Laurie Kolp, Susie Clevenger, Other Mary, Kay (Alberta, Canada), Sunflower Shan, Jinksy, Caddoc Trellis, Margo Roby, Jules, Misky, The Happy Amateur, Sara McNulty, and Grace O'Malley, with some minor editing by Grace O. 
Individual verse credits can be found here.