reconsider, because you can,
change your mind, if i'm your man,
walk away, and drift afar,
free to fly, follow that star
a great free spirit will flap its wings
back and forth the door still swings
once walked out, walk back in
don't think too hard, begin again
love's forgiving, kind, with care
heart once touched, ready to share
reconsider, because you can,
you are woman, i am man
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change your mind, if i'm your man,
walk away, and drift afar,
free to fly, follow that star
a great free spirit will flap its wings
back and forth the door still swings
once walked out, walk back in
don't think too hard, begin again
love's forgiving, kind, with care
heart once touched, ready to share
reconsider, because you can,
you are woman, i am man
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10 comments:
amazing! How talented you are, absolutely wonderful...a man, asking forgiveness... a woman strong enough to choose...I wonder, what would she do?
I just noticed this was Aghassi, a sculpter...? Thank you for sharing!
Well done Larry
Linda
I like it! Awesome read on a Friday afternoon!
kind of funny how i am going through this with my man and here is your lovely poem, yet i never asked him for forgiveness he only asked me not to walk away.
this is definately one of the best you've written!
Powerful and beautifully expressed, Larry! What is so poignant about all your writing is your willingness to bare your soul!
What writers need to do, afterall.
Gorgeous!
p.s. I thought I'd let you know that I started v-word Saturday.
Those v-words can by annoying and fun at the same time. What do you thinkk? :))
I love this one. Very, very nice.
I have put your poem about meadows everywhere, I guess my love affair is with nature...
I am sat here writing this listening to Chasing Cars by Snow Patrol on my headphones and your poem gives me insights into a world of forgiveness, something I find hard sometimes.
oh my email is mpschofield@hotmail.co.uk
very well done Larry
spoken from the heart
but then, that's what you do...
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