The Sisters in the Night
Together, but they didn’t
know how they arrived, in the center, or where they could imagine the center,
of a dark forest, howls with teeth in them, a grey silence that ate their
questions. They didn’t even know if they were the villains, the wayward, the
weird, the witches cursed to conjure sprites and devilish curs, if they were an
ancient magic feeding saplings into a heretic bonfire, its pillar of wet, white
smoke rising like a spell. The sky was black above them, stuck with stars that
seemed the pinpricks of a bloodletting, their hot light hissing and steaming in
the mists snaking through the woods. The moon was a sister of what they didn’t know.
They were not afraid. They had knives beneath their muslin, amethyst charms, a
language that bent the world back into wishing. They imagined whatever was next
was a perch with a nest of mottled eggs in its maw, a birthing of naked, flying
forms or a tender meal for skulking cats.
I am intrigued by this second collection (and the first I’ve seen) by Carlisle, Pennsylvania poet Jordan Windholz, The Sisters (Black Ocean, 2024), following on the heels of his full-length debut, Other Psalms (Denton TX: University of North Texas, 2015). The Sisters is an assemblage of short prose poems interspersed with illustrations, and includes this brief caveat in the author’s “Notes & Acknowledgments”: “Written first as bedtime stories for my daughters, these poems were largely private affairs until they weren’t. I owe almost everything to Erin Ryan for her attentive reading and care, and for her urging me to put them out in the world.” Across fifty-four prose poems, Windholz offers such fanciful titles such as “The Sisters in the Emperor’s Gardens,” “The Sisters as Points of Infinite Regression,” “The Sisters as Two among the Many,” “The Sisters as the History of Blue” and “The Sisters in the Dream of a Giant.”
These
are charming, even delightful story-poems that play with children’s
storytelling, and a way of narrative and character unfolding through a sequence
of self-contained prose poems reminiscent of Toronto poet Shannon Bramer’s full-length
debut, scarf (Toronto ON: Exile Editions, 2001), or even Montreal poet
Stephanie Bolster’s Three Bloody Words (Ottawa ON: above/ground press,
1996, 2016)—one might also be reminded of Berkeley, California poet Laura Walker’s
story (Berkeley CA: Apogee Press, 2016) [see my review of such here], Victoria,
British Columbia poet Eve Joseph’s Quarrels (Vancouver BC: Anvil Press,
2018) [see my review of such here] or New York poet Katie Fowley’s The
Supposed Huntsman (Brooklyn NY: Ugly Duckling Presse, 2021) [see my review of such here]—through shared shades of fable, fairytale and the fantastical. As
with any appropriate foray into fable, there are shadows that unfurl, unfold, through
these pages, and hardly bloodless, echoing the best of what those Brothers
Grimm might have salvaged. “It didn’t surprise them, exactly,” begins “The
Sisters as Regicides,” “how cleanly the blade slipped between the bones of his
neck, how, with just the slightest heft of their bodies on the hilt, his
screaming—like a child’s, really—cratered into a singular whimper, then a
wheeze. With his head off, the King—but was it right to call him that now?—was nothing
more than what all corpses are: a heap of flesh, a sinewy mess, time’s ragged
lace.”