firmware updates: split overly long sentence into three separate one

Surely  still not perfect but even me, a comma loving creator of
complex sentences, found rather hard to follow, so this had to get
split up.

Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>

diff --git a/firmware-updates.adoc b/firmware-updates.adoc
index 8354955ed96871d1a123622ff75e2a8c98576acd..2ccbb30f951c2d67516156e26893e65e932ae69e 100644 (file)
--- a/firmware-updates.adoc
+++ b/firmware-updates.adoc
@@ -49,10 +49,11 @@ https://fwupd.org/lvfs/devices/[supported hardware] in use. The technical
 requirement for this is that the system was manufactured after 2014 and is
 booted via UEFI.
 
-Since {pve} ships its own version of the `fwupd` package, for Secure Boot
-Support with the Proxmox signing key, which does not recommend the `udisks2`
-package, due to observed issues with its use on hypervisors setting the mount
-point of the EFI partition in `/etc/fwupd/daemon.conf` is necessary:
+{pve} ships its own version of the `fwupd` package to enable Secure Boot
+Support with the Proxmox signing key. This package conciosuly dropped the
+dependency recommendation for the `udisks2` package, due to observed issues with
+its use on hypervisors. That means you must explicitly configure the correct
+mount point of the EFI partition in `/etc/fwupd/daemon.conf`, for example:
 
 .File `/etc/fwupd/daemon.conf`
 ----