From the course: Business Writing Principles
Practicing by writing more
- [Instructor] Practice makes perfect. Whether you want to improve your golf, yoga, cooking, or writing skills, you need to practice. Each time we practice the techniques or principles, we are reinforcing the correct process or procedures. So let's start practicing so that you can become that business writer who gets noticed. Even though the following example is only 61 words with normal average sentence links of about 20 words, it needs to be revised. At this point in time, we are in consideration of changing the holiday choices, so we are sending you this email to ask you a question. We would like to know if you prefer regularly scheduled holidays or floating holidays. You can give us your choice on the form that we've attached and send it back to us by Friday. Look at the wordy phrases. At this point in time, in consideration of, we are sending this email to ask a question, would like to know, form we have attached, send it back to us. Once we decide on the actual purpose of the message and revise it to make it concise, we end with two sentences for a total of 22 words. Do you prefer regularly scheduled holidays or floating holidays? Please indicate your choice on the attached form and return it by Friday. Here's another example to revise. At our last meeting, we discussed company morale. During that meeting, we decided that having more company-sponsored activities is one way that we could try to improve the morale. Lots of us like to bicycle. Has anyone scheduled to pitch-in lunch for next month? Flex time was another idea that was suggested. Lots of us have children who need dependable childcare facilities. Company morale, company-sponsored events, bicycle, pitch-in lunch, flex time, childcare. The paragraph has six different ideas. The writer knew how the ideas connected, but the reader sees no obvious connection. Transition needs to be added to connect the ideas and the message needs to look easy to read. Here are the suggestions from our last meeting to help improve company morale. One, sponsor more company-wide activities, such as a bicycle club. Two, have pitch-in lunches once a month. Three, consider the possibility of flex time. Four, investigate the cost and benefits of providing on-site childcare facilities. Now listen to these sentences. Firstly, enclosed please find the materials related to your request. Per your request, we have also enclosed the latest newsletter. Are these words ones you normally use when having a face-to-face conversation? Firstly, enclosed please find, per your request. Or would you be more likely to say here are the materials you requested, including the latest newsletter. The more we practice correctly, the better we become. With enough practice and effort, we eventually become proficient and may even excel.
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Contents
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Understanding business writing1m 57s
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Introducing the 10 Cs of business writing2m 48s
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Making your writing complete3m 47s
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Making your writing concise4m 36s
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Making your writing clear4m 28s
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Making your writing conversational2m 37s
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Making your writing correct4m 19s
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Making your writing coherent3m 41s
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Making your writing credible2m 58s
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Making your writing concrete3m 10s
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Making your writing courteous3m 58s
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Making your writing considerate3m 36s
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Practicing by writing more3m 15s
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