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March 15, 2012

Sorry for MIA. :p there's just a lot of homework and stuff. Basically, life's been rolling about.

There's some kind of war going on outside and that gave me an inspiration. I'm not a huge fan of this pointless war, but here's a piece of advice.

Who is dignity to have your life and sanity ?
Who is dignity to give you vanity ?
God will protect your life and sanity .
In His name, you will earn dignity without serenity .
If only you give him your fidelity.


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January 7, 2012

I haven't been posting any stories lately. I ran out of ideas.
Sort of.

Anyway, I'm trying to finally write a book. (again, actually.) Wish me luck. :D And uh, maybe if you have any new words for me? Maybe I'll post a story or two.

Ciao !


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December 23, 2011

Wheww ~

That was quite long. Lol. Hope u won't get bored reading it.


I still haven't thought about the other three words. Any suggestion? :D



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Monkey - Coffee - Soap
theme : Christmas

I was a monkey. I used to hang from trees to trees with my fellow monk-mates. I lived in the woods near a farmer's house. She had a girl, named Hanna. They used to stroll around and talk. I don't really care what they were talking about eventhough I understands them perfectly. Monkeys speaks english too. Just in our own way.
Anyway, that was the past. I'm human now. At least for today. I should really thank the funny looking old man with his snowy white beards. He came to me one day and offered me a gift. So, here I am, a human.
I just transform and the without my fur, it's so cold! Even with my furs it still feel cold. I think my mom is right from teaching me to hibernate at this time of year. But I guess it's a good thing I didn't because if I do, then I won't be able to meet that red-loving grandpa and he won't give me this transforming gift.
"Hey," I heard someone behind me. I turned around and saw Hanna. I stare at her blankly, "Oh! I thought my eyes are playing tricks! Are you okay?" she walked closer to me and gasped, "You're na.. not wearing anything! Aren't you freezing?!" she quickly took off her coat and gave it to me.
I wanna say thanks as I put them on, but my tounges are numb from the freezing weather.
"You're shivering! Oh dear, let's get you inside." she helped me get up and took me to the farmer's house.
It is a long walk but it is worth it. The house is warm and comfy. She placed me in front of the burning woods and told me to wait while she walks away.
"I made you a hot coffee. I hope you like it, there's nothing in here anymore except tap water, of course. But it's freezingly cold." she handed something like a coconut cut in half thingy to me. I saw this thing sometimes. Hanna and the old farmer used to hold this thing and sit on the porch.
"Thanks." I said awkwardly. I never said english this way. It feels new. It's like learning a language all over again.
"Are you feeling warmer now?" she hand me a thick fabric and sat on the chair beside me.
"Yea.." I replied. I pulled the fabric around me. I sipped on the coffee. It taste good! The bitter sensation at the end of my tounge. "It's good.."
She smiled, "Thanks. Dad used to like it too."
The farmer. I haven't seen him in awhile, "Where.. is. he?" I asked.
"He died a month ago." she answered easily. "Heartattack."
"What about farm..?" I asked uncontrolly. I saw farmer everyday in the lawn. It's very beautiful now because of him. Who's gonna take care of it now?
"You knew?" she chuckled, "It's such a shame. I can't even do half of the thing he did. I'm planning on selling the whole place and move closer to town." she shrugged and laughed bitterly, "What a gloomy christmas."
"Christmas?" I asked. I ever heard her talking about it. But I never know what that is.
"Yeah. We celebrate christmas. Do you?" she asked back.
"What is christmas?" I asked again.
Her eyes went wider, "You don't know what is Christmas?" seeing no response from me, she scoffed, "Seriously?" I keep staring at her blankly. "Hm.." she started, "It's some sort of celebration. We celebrate the born of Jesus Christ. You know who he is, right?" she asked, smiling.
I like her smile and her voice. I have been listening to it all this time and I never got the chance to actually talk with it. So instead of telling the truth that I know about Jesus, the Creator, I lied. "No."
"No?!" she asked, almost shouting. "Then you mustn't know the whole story about him." she said,"Dad used to tell me stories about him." het eyes stares far away. She must be thinking about the farmer since she goes silent for awhile with blank eyes. She tilt her head down and smile to the ground. "Well, it's a long story to tell. Why don't you take a bath first and I'll tell you all about it." She gave me a calming smile and I know it's gonna be my best winter.


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December 22, 2011

Since it's December now, I'm going to post stories with a Christmas theme. :D It is almost D-day.

Anyway, I'm going off soon. Got another three words for the next story though.

Monkey - Coffee - Soap

Got them from my sis. I am in the process of writing the story. It'll be my next post. Feel free to take those words and make your own story. :p


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Ball - Rumor - Snow
theme : Christmas

My skin prickles under the cold weather. I should've stayed with my friends. I think I have been circling in the same area for 5 hours now and I'm hungry. Not to mention cold. The weather is getting worst by hours and I think I'm gonna be an ice statue soon. The only thing keeping me alive is the vivid fear in my heart. The rumor that Gale told me keeps echoing in my head.

•••••

"Long time ago, there lived a witch. She lived in the mountain between the trees. Arianna, was her name. She used to be the ugliest girl in the village. Nobody likes her. Princes and princesses stayed away from her like she's one of the diseases spreading in town. Overwhelmed by hurt, Arianna cursed all the pretty girls and boys she met into a wolf. So that in spite of being praised, they will be feared and avoided by all mankind." Gale told the story excitedly. We were all gathering around the fireplace and sharing stories.
We all went silence and looked at each other awkwardly. Then, like a choir, we broke into laughter at the same time.
"I'm just telling the rumors I heard, guys." Gale shouted, "It happens here. In those mountain." she pointed outside the window to the mountains that are now covered by piling snow.
"Yeah, right." Jack said under his laughter. "Then I suggest you," he pointed at me, "Janet, should watch out during our stay here."

•••••

It all seem silly then, but not if you're alone in the snowy mountain and you think you heard some noises behind you.
"Awoooooooooo." I heard wolves behind the trees and I shivered. Is this how I'm gonna die? Eaten by wolves in Christmas Eve?
Wandering around the mountains once again, I finally lost all my energies and decided to take shelter in the nearby cave under the excruciating blizzard. I throw my bag to the ground and lay myself next to it. I badly need rest. My muscles are sore and my limbs are weak.
"Awoooooooooooo!" Another howl.
I start giving up and let my eyes doze off. If this is how I'm gonna die, then please don't let me feel any pain. My eyes are only halfly opened when I see some four-legged creature approaches. The last thing I remember is the tingling sensation the fur felt on my skin.

•••••

I open my eyes and saw a ceiling of a cave. Some tingly feeling come as I try moving my hands. I look around and see wolves. Sleeping wolves. Am I seeing it right? I try squinting my eyes and see more clearly. Wolves! and not just one, Three! They are all surrounding me. As I try sitting up, they wake up too. They sit up and stare at me. Their eyes are so strange. I swear one of them has blue eyes and the others were green.
"Hello." I heard a voice in front of me.
I look up and see a girl. She's the most beautiful girl I have ever seen. She wears a black dress and her lips is as red as the blooming rose. She holds a ball on her hand and her skin is as white as the snow.

•••••

"If you ever meet a girl so pretty like the drop of sunlight in the dark with lips as red as the rose and skin as pale as the as the snow with a maidenly crystal ball at her skinny hands, then you should, and I repeat, should run away. For you have seen the wicked witch, Arianna." Gale said to me personally before I left the room.

•••••

My heart starts to beat faster and my mind races through what Gale told me. The characteristic fit the girl standing in front of me perfectly. I am stunned at my position.
"You're so pretty." she smiled, showing her perfectly white teeth. "I love your red hair. Can you tell me what's your secret for keeping that kind of hair?" She asks and leans down to me, "Would you mind sharing them?" Her yellow eyes stares right to me.
I can't even respond to the question. Fogs in the crystall ball on her pale hands starts moving in circles and turning faster.
Then, I hear a woof beside me. Apparently, the wolves have grown in number and they are all around me. I see some of them woofing harder and throw themselves to the girl. She shouts in agony and screams some words in language I don't understand. I feel a push behind me and I turn around to see the blue-eyed wolf nudging me harshly. It takes me a minute to understand what it is trying to do. I quickly stand up and grab my bag. The two green-eyed wolf and the blue-eyed nudge me again and they run to the woods.
I run as fast as I can behind them, leaving the painful scream of the girl behind me. I don't stop running eventhough I don't know where I am going. My adrenaline pushes through me and it asks me to just follow the wolves and keep running. My heart feels a huge relief as I catch the inn a few metres away. I'll be safe soon.
Or so I think. I feel a hand grabs my leg and pulls me until I fall down and my face hits the cold ice hard.


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December 21, 2011

I found this cool writing tips :D


I'll summarize it one day, maybe. =p


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